Internship at Hallmark

I sent an email to Laura, a lady that wring at Hallmark (I met her before) but she haven't replied. I attached my portfolio and CV as well.

My email to her :-

"Hi Laura!

My name is Zatul, final year BA(Hons) in illustration. Two weeks ago, Kelly Jones and you ( I believe) visited my college, Leeds College of Art. She talked about internship and I would like to intern at your company.

I did some internships at two companies before so I have some experience in working at real company but it will be amazing if I can intern at a card company as I bet the atmosphere will be different. 

I have been selling my artwork across events in the UK but recently I got a table at Thought Bubble festival, the biggest comic art festival in the UK and based in Leeds which have gained my confidence on my work and my communication skill. 

Here are link online links:- https://www.behance.net/ZatulArts, https://www.instagram.com/zatul_iffah/ and here I attached my CV and my portfolio.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Regards,

Zatul."

I bet I got some grammatical errors, if so I think it is my fault because I was rushing with this internship thing. Okay, next time, I need to calm down,stop rushing and think about stuff that I want to include on the email.

My Portfolio and CV that I attached:-

http://issuu.com/zf94759/docs/zatul_iffah_portfolio1_cc3339fd0b926c

I hope I do everything right, Well I included some of my work on the pdf and reduced the size so it less that 2M.

Next plan : I might trying to talk to a girl from BBC on my Linkedin, asking about the internship. But how shall I start the conversation?